{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"37334646","dateCreated":"1302264958","smartDate":"Apr 8, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"hmanch","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/hmanch","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1260158392\/hmanch-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/hum3bg.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/37334646"},"dateDigested":1532429190,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Read Sample Page and give feedback to the author.","description":"What do we like about the page? What needs improvement?<br \/>\nDoes it meet the criteria described on page 0.0?<br \/>\nWhat grade would you give it?","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"37338224","body":"John, and Rybeck<br \/>\nWe would give this wiki page a 2.5 because it's a good start, but kind of blank. There's only one image, and noticable improper grammer.","dateCreated":"1302269046","smartDate":"Apr 8, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"JohnizJAZ","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/JohnizJAZ","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1269017997\/JohnizJAZ-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"37338252","body":"We like that it has a video. It is also neat and organized, and the information seems factual. We noticed that there are lots of punctuation, grammar and spelling errors. There are also run on sentences.<br \/>\nit has an image, it has a summery, and it has a video\/link. It meets all the criteria.<br \/>\nWe think it deserves it deserves a 2.5. The data is messy and doesn't look edited at all. But it meets almost all of the requirements.","dateCreated":"1302269072","smartDate":"Apr 8, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"jakemmacdonald","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/jakemmacdonald","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"37338260","body":"It had pictures and a link. It needs to be revised, some words are spelled wrong. Run on sentences. It has both a video and an significant image, and briefly describes the reasoning behind their importance. It meets some, but not all. It is a solid meets.","dateCreated":"1302269079","smartDate":"Apr 8, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"JacobLittlefield","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/JacobLittlefield","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"37338262","body":"Like: Title in bold font, paragraphing, and a photo and a video<br \/>\nNeeds improvement: vague, didn't connect to the Cold War to a full extent<br \/>\nCriteria: yes<br \/>\nGrade: 3","dateCreated":"1302269081","smartDate":"Apr 8, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"kaitlyn.roy.2012","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/kaitlyn.roy.2012","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"37338268","body":"-Trevor Morin we give this page a 3.0 because it has enough content but the first &quot;paragraph&quot; is 2 sentences. It needs more analysis and be organized and separated.","dateCreated":"1302269082","smartDate":"Apr 8, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"Cponnor","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Cponnor","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"37338266","body":"The page explains what the Marshall plan is and does it well. The improvements I would suggest are grammar corrections and explain the importance a bit more. I'd give it about a 3.","dateCreated":"1302269084","smartDate":"Apr 8, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"cspil13","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/cspil13","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"37338270","body":"We like that it explains everything pretty well. The links are relevant, which is another good thing. It needs to answer\/make the answer to the essential question more clear. It meets most of the criteria and we would give it a 3.5 ish.","dateCreated":"1302269084","smartDate":"Apr 8, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"Danielle.Miville","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Danielle.Miville","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"37338284","body":"The article meet all of the credentials, and it had a nice summary and analysis of the topic. Although I couldn't see the picture or video on the page I was looking at, I saw it up on the screen being projected and the pictures and video were a nice addition to the page. I would give this project a 3 at this point even though I recognize that it is not finished yet :)","dateCreated":"1302269095","smartDate":"Apr 8, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"Katielove04","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Katielove04","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"37338308","body":"We feel that there were lots of grammatical error but the info seemed to be good. This article needs to be more reframed.","dateCreated":"1302269113","smartDate":"Apr 8, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"zackjwalker","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/zackjwalker","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"37338312","body":"There is some good information here but there are many grammatical errors and they do not clearly relate their topic directly back to the Cold War so we're giving the wikipage a 3.","dateCreated":"1302269115","smartDate":"Apr 8, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"Logannichols","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Logannichols","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"37338314","body":"We feel that there were lots of grammatical error but the info seemed to be good. This article needs to be more reframed.  3.5","dateCreated":"1302269117","smartDate":"Apr 8, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"zackjwalker","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/zackjwalker","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"37338384","body":"Pat and I gave this a three because it doesn't meet all of the requirements. The grammar was a bit choppy.","dateCreated":"1302269164","smartDate":"Apr 8, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"chaddavis2012","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/chaddavis2012","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":4}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}